Sorry about the delay in updates. I took a little time to finalize the contest winners. You can see the winning entries as well as their prize picture at http://kingv.deviantart.com/art/MRIW-Contest-One-Winners-94850212 .

I also took time to revamp the story so i've been busy writing more so than drawing lately.Changes are going well and i hope everyone is happy with the story so far.

Nah, no worries. What an update it is. It leaves me wanting to know what happens next. In the last panel, I really like her facial expression. Is she dead? In her final moments? Awesome update. I'll waiting happily for the next no matter the amount of time that must pass.

NO MUSIC!

Music playing on intro page - BAD! No cookie for you!

Seriously, take it from someone who's been doing comics for a long time. Having audio that comes on without user interaction is a VERY bad idea. It will immediately turn off a lot of people from going any further since they have no idea what other things may start popping up unexpectedly. Especially if they are discretely viewing a comic.

Aqua_Steel12334- Thank you so much! Not everyone appreciates pages without text. I'm glad you could still get a sense of what is happening no the less.Hopefully the next page will be up sometime next week.*crosses fingers*

Tiff (Guest)- I appreciate your concern about the music but it was a conscientious decision on my part to have it on the inro page. In all honesty i could have added a stop/play button but didn't feel the need to.At least 70% of people who read comics skip the homepage entirely in my opinion.I find it more distracting when music plays automatically on each comic page.If someone will let a little music deter them from reading then that's just fine. I too was a discreet comic reader at work and the best advice is to turn off the sound on your computer completely.